Monday, January 22, 2007

Ghir aayi doopahari


Kabhi dil me dard na tha na thi aankho me nami

Aaj kyo tees hai sine me jab tu tanha chod chali

Mehendi ke hatho me khoi bachapan ki saheli

Wo ghar ghar ka khel, aangan me aankh micholi

Nukkad ki khatti imali aur char-aane ki mithi goli

Baton baton me ruthna manana, karna bate alabeli

Ghanto sulajhate rahana koi unsulajhi paheli

Mitti ke khilone banate sang ki thi hatheli maili

Piya ghar pardes chali aaj, karke meri palaken gili

Ladate jhagdate lamhe ban gaye yaadein sunhari

Bit gaya sara bachpan jab dekhi teri mang sindoori

Beet gayi suhani subah ab ghir aayi hai Doopahari

5 comments:

Shailesh said...

Simply amazing!!! I cant think all and cant write like that. But it made me to riwind my DV mini tape.

Vicky's world said...

kya baat hai yaar,

woh batein albeli.......

good yar, ek pal ke liye bhi yeh nahi laga ki yeh gulzar ne nahi likhi....ab aisa nahi hai ki main revert kar raha hoon compliment ko...but truly it's the best from your pen till now.

keep up the good work

mystupendoussalvation said...

Hmmm I couldnt find words for this amazingly written!! The emotions very well expressed beta kahan se lati yeh kuch kahee or unkahee baatein uljh gayi main bhi karni hogi shaddi mujhe bhi kabhi!!

Me Thinks.. said...

sexy! It did bring a smile to my face...
So beautifully written..tell the person you have written this for to read it...
Last line again..rocks:)

Reema Banerjee said...

damn this is amazing...really brilliant