Zindagi ek unsulajhi paheli, ek ansuni kahani
ek band darwajha, ek andheri kothri
Bin eto ki diware, diwaro se bana makaan
Chalpahal logo ki par aangana sunsan
Kabhi chidio si masum, kabhi Giddho si heiran
Ek pal hasi ek pal gam ki kahani hai
Kabhi bahta dariya, kabhi jangal si virani hai
Ek lamha jiye laga barso bit gaye
Kahi lamho ka ehasas hi nahi hai
Kabhi pyass hoti hai sabkuch pine ki
Kabhi lagta hai koi aas hi nahi hai
Kise dhoondte hai kaha dhoonte hai
Ya zindgi me kisi ki talash hi nahi hai
Kya khoya kahi jo diya tha zindagi ne
Ya pane ki ab koi aas hi nahi hai
Savere ko talashte hai andhere main
Par ujalo se ab koi aas hi nahi hai
Har pal apna samajh ke jite the kabhi
Ab mohara hai kis chal ka ehsas nahi hai
Kyo aye wo badal ghanere jaha me
Jinke barsane ki aas hi nahi hai
Khade the bahut karib ham manzil ke
Kyo chod aye isaka jawab hi nahi hai
Hasti rahi duniya Zindagi bhar hampar
Kyo socha hi nahi kabhi bethkar damabhar
Kya paaya kya chahte the tujhse aie zindagi
Talashte hai khudme par koi chahat milati nahi
ek band darwajha, ek andheri kothri
Bin eto ki diware, diwaro se bana makaan
Chalpahal logo ki par aangana sunsan
Kabhi chidio si masum, kabhi Giddho si heiran
Ek pal hasi ek pal gam ki kahani hai
Kabhi bahta dariya, kabhi jangal si virani hai
Ek lamha jiye laga barso bit gaye
Kahi lamho ka ehasas hi nahi hai
Kabhi pyass hoti hai sabkuch pine ki
Kabhi lagta hai koi aas hi nahi hai
Kise dhoondte hai kaha dhoonte hai
Ya zindgi me kisi ki talash hi nahi hai
Kya khoya kahi jo diya tha zindagi ne
Ya pane ki ab koi aas hi nahi hai
Savere ko talashte hai andhere main
Par ujalo se ab koi aas hi nahi hai
Har pal apna samajh ke jite the kabhi
Ab mohara hai kis chal ka ehsas nahi hai
Kyo aye wo badal ghanere jaha me
Jinke barsane ki aas hi nahi hai
Khade the bahut karib ham manzil ke
Kyo chod aye isaka jawab hi nahi hai
Hasti rahi duniya Zindagi bhar hampar
Kyo socha hi nahi kabhi bethkar damabhar
Kya paaya kya chahte the tujhse aie zindagi
Talashte hai khudme par koi chahat milati nahi
3 comments:
Nice flow of thoughts but arrange words and lines then it will make more sense. Like at the place of "chalpahal logo ki angana par sunsan" "chalpahal logo ki sunsan angana par" then it will show the virodhabhas Alankar .
Keep it on.
ekdam dhasu likha hai...
Brilliant, I loved every line..
post it on the other one..
Hamare paas tumhari rachnatmakta ke liye koi alfaaz nahi hai,
kya likhti hai yaar, shaandar! ;)
aur talashna padega, har zindagi chahton se bhari hoti hai, bin chahat zindagi nahi....
good going.
main chandon aur alankaron ko nahi janta hoon, but i can understand the feeling behind it.
gr8 job.
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